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Lost Fic: Don't Pick the Flowers

Title: Don’t Pick the Flowers
Author: alianora
Rating: PG
Summery: sequel to Mnemosyne’s Beggar’s for Roses because a pretty little story made me nervous and feel like she was up to something. Which she was. So this is all her fault, dammit.


YOU REALLY NEED TO READ HER STORY FIRST.



There were people here.

Walking through the garden, trailing their dirty fingers down what belonged to Him.

They better be careful.

He was close, and He would enjoy the taste of fresh meat.

Especially meat as tender as this.

It had been so long since the last ones. The last one had known enough to be afraid, but she thought that tending Him would save her. She was wrong.

But that was long ago, and these two did not seem to know how close they were to Him.

One was female, and glowing with new life. She was untouchable; of course, the island had already claimed her. She came so close though; He almost lost Himself, she smelled so sweet.

But the other.

The other had pain lurking beneath his fingernails. Haunted eyes and shaking hands.

And he owed the island a life.

Closer and closer they came, and the haunted one actually reached out a hand to touch Him.

That one would dare lay a hand on Him nearly made Him strike out in anger, but He could control Himself.

He waited for the hand to fall. He was hungry, and all it would take was one little touch.

But she grabbed the hand before it fell, reprimanding the haunted one gently.

And He was forbidden to touch her.

As they walked away, He seethed in anger.

Next time, He would not be so patient.

They would return. She would not want to leave His garden untended. It was, after all, the most beautiful place on the island.

And she would bring the haunted one with her.

He, the most beautiful flower in the garden, would be waiting.

Indigo orchids are rare, after all.

END

Comments

*SQUEEEEE!!!* You took the creepy and you made it even CREEPIER! *tacklehugs you* This ROCKS! Now I want Charlie to whip out his guitar and start singing "Little Shop of Horrors." LOL!

Awesome, awesome, awesome! :-D
oh come on! you wrote it in there! claire stops him from picking it!

AND IT WANTS TO EAT YOU ALIVE!

and my brain is broken after writing this, yes. hee! should i post it the same places you posted yours? *evil cackle*

now i need an icon of an evil purple orchid. it shall say, "death."
Mwa-ha-ha-ha! My evil plan unfolds! I have broken Alia's brain with my wicked, covert taunting!

claire stops him from picking it!

AND IT WANTS TO EAT YOU ALIVE!


*batting lashes* Moi? Leave such a juicy morsel untouched? Would I do such a thing? *batting lashes more* ;) LOL!

I say post it everywhere your little heart desires! Because it rocks like WHOA WHOA.

now i need an icon of an evil purple orchid. it shall say, "death."

I suck at iconery, but...

BWAHAHAHAHA! Its PERFECT. I LOVE IT AND IT HAS ALL OF MY WORSHIP.

*bows down to orchid*

*sacrifices plot bunnies to it*

and i think YOU should be in charge of making people aware of it.

LISTEN TO THE ORCHID. IT WANTS YOU TO PIMP.
LMAO! Okay! I shall pimp! I shall pimp it at my LJ and I shall edit my original post with a link to your story. Because dude -- ROCK ON. LOL!
seriously, the orchid has eaten my brain. i am sitting here chortling and bouncing and making cookies AND cleaning AND reading lj AND emailing.

THE ORCHID HAS MY LIFE. *worships*

pimping. wheeeeee!
LOL! The orchid is a very demanding task master, it seems! Bad, orchid, bad! ;)

I have pimped! I shall pimp further as necessary to get people to read it! Because the Orchid will have all-comers kneel at its feet.

Er... roots.

Whatever.

;) LOL!
*throws orchid seeds in celebration*

DUDE. somebody make it stop!

*orchid demands more pimping. alia.must.comply*
*getting a can of Chem-Lawn Weed Killer*

*menacing Orchid with it!*

;)
lmao! i think i would be doing better if i WASNT SO HYPER FOR NO REASON.

*throws self in front of Death Orchid (Petey for short) to protect him*

NOOOO!
Petey...! LMAO!

*getting control of self* No! Alia! Move aside! The Death Orchid is dangerous! He will eat your braaaaaaaain!
BUT I LOVE HIM!

PETEY! DONT LEAVE ME!
What a WONDERFUL sequel to M's story!!! It makes total sense, too. You have amazing talent. Even though the story is short, it packs a whollop. Excellent fic!
thanks so much!

*beams*

i was worried i was the only one who got the creeeeepy feeling from her fic. i had to answer it, because i kept expecting something bad to happen in hers!
That was really quite incredible! It gave me the shivers and I loved it. ;)

thanks! im glad it worked!
Gah! I was waiting for something to happen like that all the way through Melissa's. I'm glad it didn't because hers was ever so lovely and made yours just that much creepier! I'll attack that flower with weed killer, I will. Mwhahaha! And I like that the island claimed Claire because that was shiver worthy as well.
You leave Petey alone! He never tried to eat you! *grin*

So I wasnt the only one who got the shivers from M's fic? i kept waiting and waiting and nothing bad ever happened. and THAT creeped me out. i had to fix it.

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This story is waaayyy to cool and creepy. The idea of the island claiming Claire and the idea of Charlie owing the island a life both freaked me out!
thanks! im glad you...liked it? it creeped you out? umm..yes.
Awesome sequel! Creepy and beautiful at the same time. *waits impatienty for it to become a trilogy*
thanks! and a trilogy? hmmm...will have to contemplate that. :)
err..well..that trilogy thing? kinda happened.
Wonderfully creepy! I especially like the bit about the Island claiming Claire and Charlie owing it a life.
thanks! glad you enjoyed it!
Whoa...just...whoa.

Please, never stop writing. Or else I'd have to come after you with a pitch fork and the holes it'll make in your clothes are a bitch to repair.
aagh! no pitchforks please!

and no worries, i love writing. :) thank you for the lovely words! made my day.
thanks!

hee! i love it! this is the icon im currently using for it.

His name is Petey, by the way. Say hi to the nice person, Petey! No! No, Petey! You put them down right now!
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