Superfail! (aliaspiral) wrote,
Superfail!
aliaspiral

*Facepalm*

The reason I need betas is because I write lines like this without noticing the hilarity:

Derek nodded, face unexpectedly vulnerable in a way that Stiles hadn't been expecting, and his heart gave an unexpected thump in his chest.

AND UNEXPECTEDLY HE EXPECTED IT!

Seriously. *headdesk*

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