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FIC: Screwdrivers, Snakes, and Spears (Hana Kimi TW, NC17)

Im starting 2009 off on the right path! WITH PORN.




Title: Screwdrivers, Snakes, and Spears
Author: alianora
Fandom: Hana Kimi TW
Rating: NC17
Summery:
Xiu Yi was reminded that he was definitely still asleep when Quan leaned forward, running his tongue over Rui Xi's surprisingly curved hip before dropping his head down further still.

AU of the scene where Quan gets drunk and kisses Rui Xi. Genderbendy, as Xiu Yi thinks Rui Xi is a boy.




Xiu Yi decided he had to be dreaming. He blinked heavy eyes in confusion, but the view didn't change. And, because he was dreaming, and you can't help what you dream about, he didn't say anything to let Quan and Rui Xi know that he was looking when Quan pushed the smaller boy up against the bunk behind him.

Quan must be Kissing Monster drunk, even though he hadn't been earlier before Xiu Yi passed out, and Rui Xi was drunk, and so, come to think of it, was Xiu Yi, so it made perfect sense for Rui Xi to open his mouth under Quan's, and for Xiu Yi to do nothing more than watch sleepily.

Quan's hands were cradling Rui Xi's face in his hands, a surprisingly gentle touch that Xiu Yi didn't remember seeing the last time Quan started kissing the other boys, but then again, he didn't remember the other boys kissing back, fingers combing through Quan's hair, like Rui Xi was.

If he wasn't drunk, passed out, and dreaming, Xiu Yi might have had to get up and say something about sharing the love, and maybe kissing Rui Xi himself. Which was ridiculous, because Xiu Yi wasn't gay, and had no urge to kiss other boys. No matter how soft Rui Xi's lips looked. But, he was drunk, and he was dreaming, and he closed his eyes.

When he opened them, he knew he must still be asleep, because the other boys were all still asleep, and if Xiu Yi was awake, Rui Xi wouldn't have his head tilted back and his fingers white around Quan's bicep. Quan wouldn't be on his knees, kissing Rui Xi's belly and inching down Rui Xi's pants. Rui Xi's eyes were closed tightly, and his hips moved under Quan's hands.

How pretty, Xiu Yi thought fuzzily, even though he was slightly disappointed that he couldn't get a good look anymore, because Quan had shifted, broad shoulders entirely blocking Xiu Yi's view of Quan's hands. He could see Rui Xi's face, which was nice, and, because it was a dream, Xiu Yi didn't feel weird in the slightest about imagining what Quan's hands were doing to the smaller boy.

Xiu Yi could easily picture how Quan's big hand easily covered the entire length of Rui Xi's cock as Quan took it in his fist. Xiu Yi saw Rui Xi's head fall forward, and his mouth open silently as he dug his short nails into Quan's neck. Quan was looking up at his roommate, one arm braced beside Rui Xi, other shoulder shifting as his arm moved, and Xiu Yi pictured Quan's fingers wrapped around Rui Xi's cock, dragging upwards so Quan could trace his thumb over the head.

Rui Xi was breathing hard - sharp and high pitched, almost panting, and Xiu Yi nearly smiled as Quan whispered soothing words - words Xiu Yi couldn't hear from where he was passed out on the floor, but he could see the effect they had on Rui Xi.

Rui Xi had opened his eyes, and was looking down at Quan as Quan leaned up a little, the hand that had been bracing him on the bed sliding up to touch Rui Xi's smooth cheek. Rui Xi's expression was dazed, almost like he had never touched himself before, never slid slim hands down to relieve the ache that built up, never touched the hardness that throbbed in Quan's large hand, head leaking and sensitive.

Xiu Yi was reminded that he was definitely still asleep when Quan leaned forward, running his tongue over Rui Xi's surprisingly curved hip before dropping his head down further still. Xiu Yi was going to lodge a complaint against the broadness of Quan's shoulders, as Xiu Yi could do nothing other than think about how pretty Rui Xi's cock must look as Quan licked the head of it, letting it slide into the heat of his mouth centimeter by centimeter. Rui Xi's face told the story, his slim face reddening, and a low moan making its way out of his mouth as Quan leaned forward further still.

Xiu Yi wondered to himself, even in the dream, if Rui Xi had a small enough cock that Quan could easily take the whole thing in his mouth and suck it, tongue sliding up and over the shaft and head.

Quan was edging Rui Xi's leg up to rest on his shoulder, and Xiu Yi nearly cheered, except that Quan shifted again, and still Xiu Yi was left with nothing but Rui Xi's face and his own imagination to fill in what was happening.

This dream would be remarkably frustrating, Xiu Yi considered, if it wasn't so very pretty. He is at least fairly certain that tomorrow, when he wakes up and gets sober, and remembers this, that he will have to avoid both Quan and Rui Xi for days. He shouldn't be dreaming of two boys doing these things to each other, shouldn't be trying to picture the spit slicked shaft of his best friend disappearing into the mouth of another boy. He shouldn't be wondering what Quan was doing with his hand that was making Rui Xi moan like that - low and long, with a choked sob at the end.

He shouldn't be wondering how it tasted when Quan stood up, arms going around Rui Xi and lifting the smaller boy off the ground completely, kissing him fiercely, whispering things Xiu Yi couldn't hear into Rui Xi's mouth. Things that made Rui Xi blush and drop his gaze.

Xiu Yi was dreaming, and that was why Rui Xi was looking right past him - why Rui Xi didn't even seem to know Xiu Yi was watching when Quan dropped his large hands to cup the smaller boy's backside and pull slim legs around his waist, Quan holding Rui Xi completely off the ground effortlessly. Xiu Yi was dreaming, and Rui Xi was panting, both he and Quan still partially dressed as Quan pressed his hips forward.

Xiu Yi thought of their cocks rubbing together, sliding and catching and wet with sweat and pre come, and woke up.

END



AN: Title taken from partial list of objects Freud identified as having phallic symbolism in dreams

Comments

TAIWANESE HANA KIMI PORN?!!?!?!?!

*bows to you*

Oh man, that was exceedingly hot. *wipes brow primly* Like really really really hot. Although there may be something wrong with me because I think the hottest thing ever were the references to Quan's back because MMMMM WU ZUN'S BROAD BACK and I kind of want to touch it.

Xiu Yi was going to lodge a complaint against the broadness of Quan's shoulders

LOL FOREVER. But seriously, deliciously tantalising and very true to the series (if the series was rated slightly higher, perhaps). Poor, confused Xiu Yi and his raunchy dreams!

...and now all I can think about is Ghost Boy sharing a room with him and having to witness (or at least be aware of the flavour of) Xiu Yi's dreams every night. Poor Kayashima-equivalent!
I think the hottest thing ever were the references to Quan's back because MMMMM WU ZUN'S BROAD BACK

YES. why do you think there are so many references to it? mmmmm. *licks*

But seriously, deliciously tantalising and very true to the series

thank you! i wanted it to be confused and dreamy and more than a little mixed up - I still havent decided how much was dream and how much was Xiu Yi just..getting more of an eyeful then anyone bargined for. in my mind, the last line is continued to him being alone on the floor of Quan and Rui Xi's bedroom - with a big wet spot on the front of his pants, and no way to figure out what was true and what wasnt. but i couldnt make that part work, so i dropped it.

thaaaank you for reading! i have another 3 parts to this - if by this, you mean HK tw Porn, and i do - but no idea when ill get them written.
No, Xiu Yi! Don't wake up!

This was even better than I'd anticipated. And I had HIGH hopes for this fic. I agree with biases--the references to Quan's back were hot. It was him touching Rui Xi's face that really got to me, though. Sweet *and* hot.

Quan's hands were cradling Rui Xi's face in his hands, a surprisingly gentle touch that Xiu Yi didn't remember seeing the last time Quan started kissing the other boys, but then again, he didn't remember the other boys kissing back, fingers combing through Quan's hair, like Rui Xi was.

♥ ♥

I REALLY cant decide how much of the whole thing is a dream and how much really happened..

i am SO glad you liked it, though! and that it was better than you were anticipating! And Quan's back is REALLY FUCKING HOT, so I had to add those in, and the face touching..i wanted the love in there..because he loves Rui Xi so so much, and it is so very lovely.
I REALLY cant decide how much of the whole thing is a dream and how much really happened..

How closely are we sticking to canon? Because if Rui Xi freaked out after being *kissed,* there'd have to be a conversation about how Quan knows the truth and really, really does like her before they get to sex.

I totally wouldn't complain if *everything* was real, though.

i wanted the love in there..because he loves Rui Xi so so much, and it is so very lovely.

I think Quan/manga!Sano would be the perfect guys to have sex with the first time. They both care so deeply and obviously for Rui Xi/Mizuki, and protect them, and put their own desires behind what's best for the girls. There's a scene in the manga where Sano and Mizuki are sleeping together, and she's moaning and grinding up against him in her sleep, and Sano keeps his hands to himself even though it's so.fucking.difficult. Or! Quan warning Rui Xi to be careful when she crawls into bed with him, because he's a guy, and she's a girl and he could do *things* to her. But he knows that he'd *never, ever* do anything to hurt her.

I just *melt.*
in my head, the whole thing is not a dream. he just actually passed out after all that and missed the rest.

and while i agree that Quan probably would be the perfect guy to have sex with for a girl's first time, im getting rather tired of the: "that was my first kiss!" from the girl. we need to hear that more from the GUYS, I think. i want a girl with at least a little bit of experience!

Quan is AWESOME and lovely and i want to squish him and lick his chest.
im getting rather tired of the: "that was my first kiss!" from the girl. we need to hear that more from the GUYS, I think. i want a girl with at least a little bit of experience!

I know! Drama girls get made fun of/teased for not having experience, and yet it's supposed to make them more likeable(?) to the audience. That's why I got fed up with romance novels, too. The heroine always had to be a virgin (or close to it), even in modern settings.

The girl in "100 Days With Mr. Awesome" gets dumped by her boyfriend, and gets to say "pff, whatever! Do you really think you're my first boyfriend?" IIRC, she teases "Mr. Arrogant" about it, too.

Manga!Nakatsu freaks out when he thinks the Kissing Monster stole his first kiss.

Quan is AWESOME and lovely and i want to squish him and lick his chest.

Yes!

*adds Hana Kimi TW to next year's Yuletide list.*
*. . . also adds Hana Kimi TW RPF to next year's list.*
*. . . also adds Hana Kimi TW RPF to next year's list.*

YES.

Wu Zun/Ella, i hope? because i would love that like burning.
Yes.

I don't follow celebrity culture (I'd make a very bad RPF fan), but. . . omg, they are so *cute* in the specials after each episode.

Of course, I'll likely fall in love with a hundred other fandoms between now and Yuletide, but for now the thought makes me very happy.
Wow. Just... wow. I LOVE this story! I love Rui Xi. I love how he tries to reassure himself that he's not gay. I just love it all. There is far too little drama fic on the interwebs... I'm ridiculously glad I found this one!

(BTW, I am totally friending you. Dramas + Firefly + Star Wars + Roswell + Tin Man + Earth-freaking-2 (which remains one of the best things my eyes have ever seen. EVER)... how can I not?!)

Edited at 2009-01-07 06:53 pm (UTC)
Hee! thank you so much! there IS way too little drama fic on the internets, but some of us are actively working to fill that void!

welcome aboard! im very bad about jumping topics quickly, or, alternately, focusing on one show that NO ONE ELSE CARES ABOUT for long stretches of time, so buckle your seatbelt and keep your arms and legs inside the lj at all times!
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