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HYD: Suijiroh

FIC: Smooth and Sophisticated (HYD, G)

Title: Smooth and Sophisticated
Author: alianora
Rating: G
AN: I just found this rattling around COMPLETED in my drafts folder. Might as well post it!
Summery: Soujiroh isn't sure when it happened.



Soujiroh isn't sure when it happened.

One second, he was sitting comfortably, sprawled upon a couch, looking hot; the next thing he knew, Yuki-chan walked in and smiled, and now here he was on his ass on the floor.

This was not in the plan.

The plan was to be smooth. Charming. Confident.

Tease Yuki-chan about something little, watch her blush and stutter as he got closer, and then leave, knowing that she completely adored him and that all women loved him, still.

That wasn't exactly what happened.

Admittedly, things between he and Yuki had been a little..different since that night on the roof, but he hadn't thought it had gotten this bad this quickly.

If it hadn't been uncool, he would've rubbed his butt, because that HURT. He wasn't even sure how he had managed to lose his balance. He drew himself up to his feet with difficulty, grasping his dignity with both hands, and when he looked up, there she was, a smile stealing it's way over her face.

She tucked a lock of hair behind her ear, and looked up at him from under lowered eyes.

He knocked over a vase.

END

Comments

*COOOOOO*

I LOVE THIS. I love Sujiro just LOSING it over her. I wish this had happened. I really do.
I love too-smooth guys losing their shit over girls and becoming utter spazzes. IT MAKES ME SO HAPPY.

*smootchies* thank you!
Have I mentioned that I love you recently? Because I *do.* How could I not, with lines like this: "One second, he was sitting comfortably, sprawled upon a couch, looking hot; the next thing he knew, Yuki-chan walked in and smiled, and now here he was on his ass on the floor."

There's nothing more appealing than a smooth guy loosing his cool and turning into a dork around the girl he likes. ♥ And the last line is utter perfection.
*beams at you* I love being loved! And I love you! And speaking of love, I am totally stuck on the Love Spell fic and I need HELP. Mind if i send it to you and see if you cant make a couple suggestions to get it moving again?

There's nothing more appealing than a smooth guy loosing his cool and turning into a dork around the girl he likes

I KNOW. I LOVE IT SO MUCH.

thank you!
Send the Love Spell fic my way!

I KNOW. I LOVE IT SO MUCH.

I love dorks in general, but SECRET DORKS are extra special. They may, in fact, be the VERY BEST DORKS.
I've managed to confuse myself with email addresses, as I didnt save yours under a name, for some reason. Are you temporary blue?
Yup. temporary_blue (at) yahoo (dot) ca.

i thought so, but then i second guessed myself right before i hit send, because what if i was wrong? who is temporary blue, and what would they think of this showing up in their email account when we only share *insert name here* fandom!

sent!

AND YOUR ICON. OH JIRO. Your stupid face!
OMG this is so so cute! *throws heart shaped confetti* - Soujiroh, so very smooth...
*beams* thank you! i cant help but love it when the smooth guy makes a total idiot out of himself in front of the girl he likes.
too kawaii! thanks for the fun read! :-)
thanks for reading!
oooooooooh, klutsy soujiro, so cute
thank you!
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