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HYD: Three Hours

FIC: Your Heart Beneath My Hands (Hana Yori Dango, R)

Title: Your Heart Beneath My Hands
Author: alianora
Rating: R
Summery: This boy was slow emotion beneath her fingers, quicksilver heartbeat in his chest.




She had seen him in anger, fists curled and mouth tight so many times, that it was a surprise to see his mouth go slack and his hands open when she let her fingers trail up to his shoulders, goosebumps lifting where fingertips barely touched.

She felt him inhale, a stuttered breath that he held when she pressed her palms to his chest.

She glanced upward, and he was watching her. Looking at her with the same look he had given her when he told her he loved her. The same look when he told her he would wait for her to know her own feelings.

That look shook her.

This boy could have anything he wanted. Any one he wanted. And for some reason, he had decided he wanted her.

He shivered under her hands, but didn't move. Didn't raise his hands to touch her in return. Didn't presume.

Makino, he whispered, his eyes on her face. Makino, what are you doing? His voice was almost soft, not the bark that she was used to. She ignored it and tilted her head to look up at him.

You're too tall, she said with a smile, hands coming to rest on his hips.

You're short. And stupid, he said waspishly, throwing his head back. He inched closer to her, bringing his hands up to her back.

His touch was almost hesitant, something he would deny if she said anything.

She was sure when he talked to F4, that he would brag - how bold he was, how she gasped, how he knew what he was doing.

That boy - that loud, rich, entitled, moronic boy was not the same as the one who was here with her, now.

This one was busy trying not to stare as she unbuttoned her shirt, leaving it on but opened. This one was holding his hands a breath away from her heated skin, looking to her for permission.

This boy was slow emotion beneath her fingers, quicksilver heartbeat in his chest.

Makino, he breathed against her neck.

She slipped her arms around his shoulders and held him as he shivered.

END

Comments

Oh. My.

THAT is awesome. In every fabulous way imaginable. Because god, YES, he is SO very virginal and trying to hide it. And this is just what he WOULD be like. SHOULD be like. YES!
*beams at you* I wrote stuff!

and YAY YOU LIKE IT YAY!
*WHIMPER* OMG LOVE
*blows kisses*
How did I miss this fic? So, so beautiful.

I loved this:

She was sure when he talked to F4, that he would brag - how bold he was, how she gasped, how he knew what he was doing.

That boy - that loud, rich, entitled, moronic boy was not the same as the one who was here with her, now.
thank you! this one has been sitting on my hd for a while, half done. so, while avoiding love spells, this is what came about.

thank you!
*swoons*
Thank you!
LOVE IT. I especially love the interplay between Domyouji's wonder, arousal, love, arrogance, tenderness, and above all desperate attempts to hide how inexperienced he is. <3

Also, since I've been a lurker here for a while (I'm shy!), I just wanted to take this moment to introduce myself and say how much I like your Hana Yori Dango, Hana-Kimi and Gokusen stuff because (1) they're well-written and (2) they're three of my favourite fandoms. (Also, your giant hilarious Hanadan picspam contributed greatly to my headlong plunge entry into the world of that series. So thanks.)
*falls to floor in shock* I have lurkers?! Where? *starts looking under rocks*

Welcome aboard the good ship ImOnCrack, regardless!

and thank you! Im working on one other HYD fic involving Makino, Domyouji, and sex, but it's...not quite going to get the same feeling as this one. *snickers to self*

and i will freely admit that i go look at that picspam fairly often. and LAUGH. so i am VERY glad you like it and that it helped pull you to the dark side into breaking your own capslock FOR JAPAN!
Hey, cool! When you say it's not the same feeling, does that mean it's going to get prontastic? Because that's good too. (just thought I'd ask.) XD

Yeah, when I marathoned the series I kept going back to the picspam and reading the comments and laughing, cos it was so dead on (especially the "I Love You Dorkface" moments... personally, I like calling him Stupid Hair Boy, even after I got accustomed to seeing Jun Matsumoto with a perm). I think HYD is the most capslock-breaking series I've watched so far (and, I think, will not likely be surpassed in capslock-breakiness thanks to the addition of a second season, the feature film and Oguri Shun).

Also, on the subject of crack, how cracky would a HYD (and possibly Gokusen) drinking game be? The idea just popped into my head...
ok, tell me the truth, when you think of Makino and Dorkface having sex, what do you think of? Me? I think of car wrecks and falling out of bed and one of them getting an elbow to the eye. There might even be Dorkface's repeated phone calls to F4 for moral support and directions. In short, their first time is going to be a DISASTER. How could it not be?

so, no, not so much with the porntastic.

however, if i can get Rui to cooperate, there might be another ficlet where he..uh..accidentally watches the two of them get it on.

hee! I really and truly love Dorkface with my whole gleefully wicked little heart, so to hear you like my picspam that much fills me with glittery rainbows.

...no, wait, that was Arashi.

and dude, HYD broke my capslock IN HALF. i love Hana Kimi, I adore Gokusen, but HYD just..swept me away.

...and yes, i like your crack. please, tell me more about this drinking game? What would the rules be? Would you get to take a shot everytime Rui and Dorkface had a moment? If we took a drink everytime Makino or Dorkface called each other names, we'd be drunk by ep2!
First time? I think of squabbling and awkwardness, and possibly bodily harm, and Domyouji trying desperately not to show his inexperience. LOL. "Prontastic" is just fun to say.

Well, the drinking game I had in mind was just along the lines of take a swig every time X happens, and for things that are a step up take an extra swig. It depends on the type of alcohol (I was basing this off of beer or wine). As I said, I just thought this up, so I just wanted to bounce the idea off someone (who loves HYD as much as I do, and possibly more). Examples I've thought up so far include:

- take a swig every time someone punches someone; extra swig if it's not Makino or Domyouji doing the punching; extra swig if Domyouji starts a fight. Down the glass if Domyouji gets beat up on.
- take a swig every time a luxury/designer good is mentioned/shown. CHUG if it's that montage in Episode 1... start the show off right haha...
- down the glass every time Papa Makino loses money/his job
- down the glass when someone gets a red notice
- take a swig every time the three bitchy girls say something catty to Makino; extra swig if Domyouji pushes the main bitchy girl aside
- take a swig every time Domyouji screws up a phrase/name/word; extra swig if it's not Japanese (Humingyay! My sweat honey! XD)
- take a swig every time someone confesses their love to someone else; extra swig if it's Domyouji; down the glass if it's Makino.
- take a swig every time the dango shop owner starts talking about a man she once loved; extra swig if he's famous; down the glass when the man who plays all these guys shows up as a "real life" character instead of just in the monologues
- take a swig (and possibly attempt to use the phrase in conversation, if you speak Japanese) every time Mama and Papa Makino try to teach Susumu a new Japanese phrase. (HYD always provides neat vocab lessons!)

I also thought of a Gokusen one earlier when I was bored. And for either Gokusen or HYD, take a swig every time Matsujun says "baka." I think that alone will inebriate someone XD
Very sweet and lovely^_^
late reply - sorry!

but thank you!
That was incredibly lovely.
thank you so much! and thank you for the rec! I saw it, but didnt comment on it, because i promptly lost the bookmark
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